Small update to fix an error/inconsistency with the story location, and add in a way back to the title screen when the game finishes. In earlier drafts the story took place inside, and in this final one it takes place outside. I'd love to add in some branching paths to the story,  as suggested in the jam comments, I just left things a bit last-minute for this jam and wanted to get a submission in

This was my first  time with twine, and I had a lot of fun. I've learned a few things that I'll put into my next IF which will be up in a few days. This story is based on a couple of OC's in a fantasy D&D style-setting, so thanks again to the people who read it and again for the feedback in the jam's comments!

I asked in the jam community about publishing edits, and was told that would be fine to put the updates out before voting period ends.